Sunday, March 11, 2007

Betterer (EDITED FOR FIXES)

Went ahead and re-inked (of course I would) It fits more consistently with the previous pages, being a little less INK HEAVY. I also took out the dark backgrounds in 1 and 3 so they'd match said pages.

Thanks for the input Sam.

Posted by Bart King at 3:13 PM

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Mostly betterer. I think J's mouth (bottom left panel) looks better in the first one, although the rest of his head is improved. Also, Seth's pointing under-forearm looked better all black like the first. But those kinda fixes are what photoshop is for...
Still, better than anything I can do!

March 12, 2007 at 6:44 PM
Bart King said...

word. i agree with the mouth thing, i was trying something different, trying to convey some sort of terror and repulsion. that might get cut and pasted.

March 12, 2007 at 6:48 PM

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